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Pleasurable pain
Painful pleasure
Press your lips to mine
Yes, make me ache
For what I cannot have
Say that you love me
It’s a dream, it’s a lie
I know... I don’t care-
Tonight is for pleasure
Tomorrow I’ll face the pain
©2003-2009 ~mochashello
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just a short free verse poem I came up with while working on ideas for a different poem- enjoy! Comments welcome and appreciated as always!

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:iconlelekelley:
This is wonderful. It sounds so much like things I have done to myself so many times. It reminds me of the guy I am constantally writing about now, more than any of the others, maybe because he is the most recent, maybe because he hurt me the most, or taught me the most, I am not sure which yet. I really love your work.

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=lelekelley :smooch: :heart: :glomp: ~Velerin
:iconkaku:
This is the way I feel a lot with my girlfriend. I'll be moving out of state soon, so I'm trying to spend as much time with her as possible and not think of moving away.

This poem really hits home for me.

Good work.

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:iconangelicrose:
short and sweet just like me.......great job! I love it :D (Big Grin)

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:heart: Our hearts are drunk with a beauty our eyes could never see. :heart:
:iconunheard-voice:
very nice. putting the pain out of your mind to deal with later. very well written. keep it up. and thanks for your help

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The soul: "when it breathes through [man's] intellect, it is genius; when it breathes through his will, it is virtue; when it flows through his affection, it is love."
:icontwiztedashes:
mmmhmm.. pain and pleasure. life's deadly combination. great poem!

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i'm just another face without a name.... to whom it concerns...
:iconlost-perception:
Great model and nice photo. I love the poem.

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"By life or Death on with the Revolution."
[link] The earth is being transformed into a prision planet
:iconmorgana-stock:
is a very beautiful poem :) (Smile) I think it match really wel the photo with it :) (Smile)

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Morgana
:iconekg:
such a painful read...but i know.
well expressed.

ViNce
:iconvash5b5:
Its nice and short yet so real with honesty. Blocking out the emotional pain for that small moment of peace and pleasure. Great Job!

Peace,
Vash5b5

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