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They say a friend
Is a friend forever
Even in
The roughest weather
Though life’s seas
Are tossed about
A friend will be there
To help you out

But there are times-
It’s sad but true-
When friendship’s flame
Dwindles in you
The excitement is gone
It’s not new anymore
And painfully so
Our old friend is a bore

So we put away friendship
With a lock and a key
I just want to say…
Don’t let that be me
It may not be new
But don’t let it die
I won’t if you won’t
I won’t say goodbye.
©2003-2009 ~mochashello
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Friendship takes work.... comments welcome

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:iconveritactive:
I've had moments like these ... and they hurt. Close friendships, they're work. But you both reap the benefits at the end.

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Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
~ Dylan Thomas
:iconevilfaeries:
Aww
IM sad now.
I loved this tho.
Good write,
Heart Kandice

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:iconangelicrose:
This is really good. I feel bad cuz i have given up on some of my friendships....and now after reading this.........i miss them :( (Sad)

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:iconalicatylon:
that speaks so truely... gods.. you are so good...

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doomslug of chaos! awaaayyyy!

~alicatylon
:iconchiroptera:
very close to the heart.. you are good with emtions.. *is feeling "wow-ed" over* another Thumbs Up for you.. i really like this too..

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:iconartfrommyheart:
love it!

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BE YOURSELF.No one can ever tell you you're doing it wrong
:iconbrokensoul14:
great poem. I can relate to it and friendships can be tough
:iconjugis-os:
My eyes are burning (in the 'tears' way). This poem is so close to home my heart nearly skipped a beat. I've had friend troubles lately... I really liked this poem. Good job. Rhyming is hard work, I know.
:iconshootiinstar:
Omg...ii luv iit...its soo true...n meaninful...it makes so much sense,...gr8 job..x

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