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Sometimes I can\'t stand not having you
Sometimes my soul cries out in agony
apart from you
My arms ache to hold you
My eyes long to see from you
a loving glance or smile
My lips tremeble in want of yours
My heart swirls in lonely confusion
and aches to be joined with your own
My fingers long to touch your brow-
to feel the locks of your hair
running through them

Oh rejection stings! But please....
Make yourself happy.
©2003-2009 ~mochashello
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Something I wrote a very long time ago, but I still kinda like it. Not real sure though, so thoughts and comments are appreciated!

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:icondreamcatcher20:
wow. this is really good.

My arms ache to hold you
My eyes long to see from you
a loving glance or smile

this is my favorite part.

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To love, to care, to listen...i am here.
:icondestinyrose:
i really lilke the cynical bitter ending... okay so i like the make yourself happy... part.. the whole thing is good but.. yeah...my thoughts..that will be 25 cents.. I am just kidding im in a very onry mood

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_you figure out who you are when you find who you love_

"I sleep to dream, I dream of you. If only I could dream sleeping next to you."
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:icon3rd-floo:
geez... mochashello, I must say, that wonderful! I can almost feel the pain from it.... :`o\

you did a tremendous job in making it flow so nicely, wish I could do stuff like that!

Even tho its old, keep it up, i'll have to see what other great stuffs you got! =Þ

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"Let us not look back to the past with anger, nor towards the future with fear, but look around with awareness."
-- James Thurber
:iconseekingtruth:
Sniff Sad... but definitely a good poem.

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"Never apologize for showing feeling. When you do so, you apologize for truth." -Disraeli
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Thanks is nice, but a comment is better!
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:crazy::eyepopping:Keep smiling!:stab::slow:
:iconunheard-voice:
beautiful work. my favorite part is :
"My heart swirls in lonely confusion
and aches to be joined with your own"
you write so well. keep it up.

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The soul: "when it breathes through [man's] intellect, it is genius; when it breathes through his will, it is virtue; when it flows through his affection, it is love."
:iconfearful-toxicin:
I know the feeling. My heat aches all the time for someone to hold but I grasp at air. I really like this.

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Greater is he that lives in me than he that is in the World

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:iconicklefluffywolfy:
Oh yes... it just drips with emotion... wanting someone and yet wanting them to be happy... me heart aches like this too... *sighs deeply* great poem!

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:iconlelekelley:
Crying This was too appropriate for me to have to read after reading something of Preston's. It describes the random bitter confused emotions that are running through me perfectly, especially now that he happily talks to me about how happy he is with Whitney. And reading this I know that I will always be a slave to my emotions because no matter how I suffer I will always want one thing:

Oh rejection stings! But please....
Make yourself happy.


Hug This is wonderful +fav

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:iconangelicrose:
oh yeah i love the sarcastic ending. RAWR lol. Great job with this, nice twist, me like Nod

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:heart: Our hearts are drunk with a beauty our eyes could never see. :heart:

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